Thursday, July 9, 2009

Like A Rubber Ball Comments

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I am always rewinding things
To hear the sounds of what
It is missed between spaces:
Like words that were not spoken,
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Romeo Della Valle
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Ken E Hall 16 June 2013

Nothingness resounded in your brain you explain what we all have...hollow sounds...excellent bouncing of words Romeo regards

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Heather Wilkins 26 May 2013

an excellent write about yourself. many things go on in our minds.

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William Jackson 17 March 2012

Nice write. I like this poem. It reminds me of Emerson's admonishment for a man to speak his mind or risk hearing his own ideas expressed by someone else.

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Halcyon Poemcrafter 04 July 2011

'Incomprehensible Maddening hollow sounds Crash against walls of hollow sounds... Which drive me to madness Trying to coexist In a world outside me...' Like it! Nice write

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Ritty Patnaik 28 December 2009

there is sometimes a feeling of void and emptyness between space andtime, where there is only inaction.i loved this poem because it goes from matter to subtle things, which is a undescribable feeling.great poem. ritty

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Ivor Hogg 28 December 2009

Sadly we oftem miss the important whilst listening to the medley of irelevant sounds

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Christina Clemente 27 September 2009

A WELL WRITTEN POEM THERES A BUNCH OF PEOPLE THAT CAN RELATE TO THIS; WELL DONE. HUGS AND KISSES, CHRISTINA

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rago rago 23 July 2009

a real life.........purity arrived and finding out who am I is the course of life........

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Romeo Della Valle

Romeo Della Valle

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