Wednesday, September 19, 2012

Like A Rose Comments

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Like a rose
Upon a broken bough
Struggling just to live;
So are the lives
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Lloyd Savage
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Thomas Vaughan Jones 04 April 2014

A little pocket allegory between a broken rose and suffering people. The lines are somewhat staggered, but no matter. Some quality endrhymes thrown in for good measure make for a PH jewel. This line is a tad ambiguous and needs attention. Otherwise nicely written. Who knew just how the give.

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