Monday, March 24, 2014

Like A Raspberry, Like A Sin Comments

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Like a raspberry..
I see your voice
As it melts
Down my miraculous curves
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Mun Abed
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Bonnie Lundgren 17 August 2015

Not bad! Your lyricism is lovely. Some parts are a bit unclear for someone who is only getting the second-hand experience, but overall, this is very good. Keep it up!

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