Like A Marshmallow Comments

I feel the same way about music, although I've never thought to describe it like that. I love that last line so much. I haven't genuinely smiled in so long, and that line got me to smile.

wow n amazing piece of work! ! ! keep it up XD

yes and it brings out the sweetness in you..a lovely poem

this is like the best poem ever.... like a marshmellow... i'll have to remember that... and thank you for reading my poem :)

Commendable work, Helena. I like your employment of metaphor & asimile in using musical parlance, to express. Nicely Done! ~FjR~ -2008-

Brilliant very well put, nice poetry