Like a lunatic
she had all my oceans rivers canals and seas
tied as her anklet
she ran with that racket
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the expressions are thoughtful and provoking.......... well penned........
Awesome Rehan. The first of your pen I have read and I'm very impressed. I shall be reading more of you. (10 from me)
i'm out of words...i don't know what and how to write my feelings for this poem....marvellous, superb, excellent etc.etc..but your and other fellow poets writting is beyond all those words..least i can do is salute you with a bow for such a beautiful and expressive write...my all 10's are for all your write's...the title attracted me cause its my nick too 'lunatic' lol rgds asif
Beautifully worded. Powerful expression of love despondence......10
Like a lunatic she had all my oceans rivers canals and seas tied as her anklet she ran with that racket traumatizing my thirst cloudless wrenched and wasted Like a lunatic I just quoted what i liked, what if you see the whole poem here! ! !