Thursday, April 19, 2018
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There will always be a reason
For you to come back to me.
No matter how far fate takes you
From the origin of our story
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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7/27/2025 1:03:31 PM # 1.0.0
Dang, Suzanne! This sizzles—which is to say, yow! It has strong gravitational pull. Craft-wise something to consider—the moon-comet images. Moons orbit planets, yes? I don’t have a suggestion, but you’ll figure something out. -Glen
Hi Glen! Thanks for commenting. In this poem the moon is orbiting a planet and the comet goes whizzing by every seventy years or so.