she gigged me like a flounder
when I put my arms around her
it was not long before regret sank in
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Nice lyrical poem with a shade of disappointment overtaking the romantic vibes of 'a flounder'. Thanks. I knew that she would drive me crazy then ..............I set my sails and finally got away ...........the grief I feel endures until this day
So beautiful the rhyme with -ounder, a perfect composition.