Saturday, September 23, 2017

Like A Flounder Comments

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she gigged me like a flounder
when I put my arms around her
it was not long before regret sank in
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Barry Middleton
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Dimitrios Galanis 25 September 2017

So beautiful the rhyme with -ounder, a perfect composition.

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Rajnish Manga 24 September 2017

Nice lyrical poem with a shade of disappointment overtaking the romantic vibes of 'a flounder'. Thanks. I knew that she would drive me crazy then ..............I set my sails and finally got away ...........the grief I feel endures until this day

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