Wednesday, December 14, 2011

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The sunset began before my eyes,
Angels sinking their heads in soulful cries.
The soldier's thumping footfalls fade away
The oldman now drags his atrophied feet about all day.
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Warrith Olawale
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Alafe Ramat 08 August 2012

Ur use of words ar realy great, ....

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Pheko Motaung 01 February 2012

I keep reading this poem of and over and every I feel as if I've been hit with a bomb in the face! Really it is fantastic.It is fabulous.Congratulations on a stunning achievement

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Pheko Motaung 01 February 2012

What a great work of supreme art.You are a master with words and I wish you the best.Thank you so much

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