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great verses penned by great Asif! 10+

thus now my breaths are breaking like weak thread my heart felts like it never had the sound of thuds and flow of lime I'm watching the casket of me and no one by my side I'm the keeper of my own shrine huh! my appearance is like a divine It's a very deep poem, Asif. Watching one's own casket is beyond bodily world. Best Wishes Naseer

An admiring piece well crafted.

The format of the poem is great because of its rhythm and flow. Also the repetition in the las line of each stanza worked well. I sense acutely your longing (or even now being granted) to overpower adversity. An extremely well crafted poem. 10 Karin Anderson