Monday, November 5, 2012

Like A Coin Comments

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Like a coin I roll down the path of mortal life.
Wrapped around me my eternity,
A silent Witness, enjoys the partnership.
In Its grace it lets me feel like
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Savita Tyagi
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Sarah Mkhonza 11 November 2017

Your poem is as wise as the silent coin. Thsnks for writing with so much wisdom. It takes deep thought to see so much in something we take so lightly..

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Savita Tyagi 12 November 2017

Thank you very much Sarah Mkhonza for reading the poem and your kind comment.

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Bri Edwards 11 March 2015

This poem, though short, is a bit deep for my mind. BUT after reading it a few times, it seems to be coming more into focus for my aging brain. i might even get it, or most of it i.e. understand it! i liked the reference to head and tail, especially after the comparison to a coin. it is nice that the speaker feels comfortable and secure in life and the journey to the 'next one'. IF that is the message. my favorite lines: Ignorant of mysterious beginning Final destination- a blinded corner Still I claim the path's ownership. bri :)

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Karen Sinclair 16 November 2012

Ignorant of my head or tail, beautiful, enhanced by the ignorance of your mysterious beginning and the final corner... the more i read the more emotional i get....beautiful...tyvm karen

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 09 November 2012

Good imagination of a coin that runs from the beginning to the end! well done!

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