Monday, November 5, 2018

Like A Cloak Comments

Rating: 5.0

You wear your pain
Like a cloak
That you wrap yourself in.
Your own protective shell,
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Haidee Majola. 09 November 2018

*Like a wounded deer...looking for a place to die in solitude* Such is deep searing pain that is raw. Thank for a realistic human phenomenon expertly delivered.

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Practicing Poetess 09 November 2018

Wow Haidee, thank you for your fabulous and insightful comment! I liked the deer analogy!

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Kostas Lagos 06 November 2018

Is there a greater pain than having no one to talk to?

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Practicing Poetess 06 November 2018

Thank you, dear Kostas, for reading & rating! Self-imposed isolation is the cruelest of all. Rather foolish to use pain as a fortress to presumably protect against more pain! : -)

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