Saturday, November 18, 2017

Like A Careless Black Bird Comments

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I dreamed I could fly, free like a bird.
Just when I woke up I was back in the dirt,
Back in absurd, back being hurt,
Back to see everything that had occurred,
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Lynn Lullaby
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Jazib Kamalvi 19 November 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Lynn. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 November 2017

The magnificent opening line rounds up things..a wonderful poem is shared..10

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Roving Poet 18 November 2017

Such a heartfelt write.

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