Wednesday, December 11, 2019

Like A Carefree Bird Comments

Rating: 5.0

O live life like
A carefree bird;
Life may be a
Sweet-water spring,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 December 2019

old poetry is like golden ornaments all women get the gold changed so do we poets it glosses more again well done AP WELL DONE AP LOVELY POETRY OF 2012 NOW 2019 AS NEW

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 December 2019

Thanks, what you say is: sometimes old wine has to be put in a new bottle. Need of the time, may be.

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O POET ME POET 14 December 2019

yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I suppose sooooooooo

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 December 2019

Oh, and the real truth dawns today to this bumbling old man! ...that Poet Poet and O poet Me Poet are the same. Am I right?

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Mihaela Pirjol 12 December 2019

Look at the birds, they never worry about anything, my grandmother used to say...this poem resonates somehow with it...a concise poem, but powerful.

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 December 2019

Immense thanks dear poet, but I have a confession to make. This ditty I wrote as a quatrain in 2012 and being not satisfied I kept it to incubate... visited again recently, and was abt to discard it, when... I just split each line into two, and made some minor modifications... and lo in seems it is much more acceptable in this time and age.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 December 2019

A very cute poem sir! Loved reading this magnificent little poem.... ...Full marks!

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 December 2019

Thanks Doctor poet. Poets are no patient, they are rather impatient, but you know what dose of medicine to give them.

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Valsa George 11 December 2019

Our fortune is so volatile. In a clear sky, suddenly storm clouds can gather. So try to enjoy life when we can. Like a free bird, let us liberate ourselves of all ties and manacles. Beautifully expressed!

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 December 2019

Thanks, but you have put it no less beautifully, dear poet.

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 December 2019

life is carefree bird written in the heart of bard!

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 December 2019

Thanks MB for the compliment, 'bard' thanks, but the hat does not fit so well on my head.

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