Like A Canticle Comments

Deft use of simile and metaphor. I agree with Kesav. Your postscript is eloquent and adds to the richness of your beautiful theme.10/10. From, Sandra

Optimistic my soul Pessimistic my heart! Superb lines each and every one of them, the simile of the sun all add beauty to it on the whole. A diamond with a thousand facets wil shine out of the eyes which hides it within its heart. A wonderful poem of supplication and very expressive too. Leena

lovely write...and the more so postscript...thanks...10

excellent...the many faces of love u portrayed so beautifully...especially the comparison to a gambler... : D