Like A Candle Comments

very nice...very sensual...liked this one a lot happy writing arti

I really like this poem, it's wonderful! I like that it's so seductive and sensual but at the same time soft and caring. Keep it up, Preeti. -L.C.

Two moth souls recognize each other in candle light.........and I see the wax like their happy tears?

Whoa, this poem just blew me away! I really like it! One of your best I'd say ~Amber~

Preets.... Please do not do this to us men here..... LOLz.... so Preets talking love now! ! A love-ly 10 for you. Like Nalini says - This is just HOT here..... passion's melting like the wax from the burning candle! I wonder, what the poet was upto and who was in mind? Technically speaking - This is very beautifully written as mentioned by FJR. I loved the way you built the heat with your words around the theme.

hey hey preets...its getting very hot here...that candle burns as it melts into hearts...all i can say is WOW...looks like there is a man'moth' around that candle! ! ! ! ...emmm...love...nalini

AHHHHH, AMOURI, Young Lady so well expressed in such fine metaphor! Splendid job, Preeti! '''''''''''''''''''FJR

Sweetheart, Now you are talking! ! Was waiting to see one on love from you...and delighted to see a brilliant one from you.He will consume himself in you like a moth to a flame..lol! Love...TO

Very good composition seems you have a fan in me now....