Like A Butterfly Melting Comments
The night is torn apart;
fractured and shattered by
the memory of you.
Stars shake and die,
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That feeling of memories gnawing at one's heart… vividly expressed.
A very painful write. How life hurts when a cherished relationship is broken off. "Life inches along like a filthy worm.." Expressions gnawing at your heart..
A poignant write. It expresses in beautiful detail the pain that a person feels in a broken relationship. Superb imagery.
Lovely simply lovely. A poem lovely poem lace with sadness yet the images are wow. Great write
Totally love the imagery in your poem, it adds depth to the pain of your loss, forms a picture in the mind of the reader. Really great poem, thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Can understand the pain you are going through. Nice poem.
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7/23/2025 7:31:10 AM # 1.0.0
My revisit to this poem is thoroughly enjoyable