my long term feelings
dont last long
1 important thought enters
and another one goes
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aw what a good poem.I love how the reader can really tell through your poems how much you need and love this person.Theyre great.
I don't wish to sound critical, but is there an editor at this site who at least looks at what is published here and sent out to other members? What if a writer asks for help? Just wondering. It does say Poems and not 'critique, doesn't it? Thanks