Wednesday, February 5, 2014

Lights Gone Out Comments

Rating: 5.0

So many lights gone out.
Ones loved and lost
that would shine for us
through the years, each
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Susy Evelyne
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Maria Gonzalez 01 August 2015

Well written with evocative.

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Stephen Katona 26 July 2014

I love this poem, it's such a pleasure to read how the lights that guide us leave our world grey in their absence, and yet are never truly gone. You describe so well how people feel when they have lost a loved one. I'm so glad you gave everyone this comforting ending.

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John Brown 17 February 2014

A well written and thought out poem, Susy. I would agree that one's light is never truly gone - just shining in a different place.

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Anil Kumar Panda 14 February 2014

beautiful lines.loved very much.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 06 February 2014

the last four lines are outstanding!

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Valerie Dohren 05 February 2014

A lovely poem, very inspired.

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Susy Evelyne

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