So many lights gone out.
Ones loved and lost
that would shine for us
through the years, each
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I love this poem, it's such a pleasure to read how the lights that guide us leave our world grey in their absence, and yet are never truly gone. You describe so well how people feel when they have lost a loved one. I'm so glad you gave everyone this comforting ending.
A well written and thought out poem, Susy. I would agree that one's light is never truly gone - just shining in a different place.
Well written with evocative.