Monday, August 18, 2008

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red lines
and blue lines, intersecting and
encircling these two obsidian monuments
who stand haughty and implacable normally
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Vaishali Bhardwaj 17 August 2013

really fantastic poem

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Chuck Audette 27 September 2012

Ben No: Interesting piece of observation and personalization! -Chuck

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Sherif Monem 18 August 2008

It is good poem. Try not to have run away lines.

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Saint Cynosure 18 August 2008

I actually like this..., its pretty good.

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