Thursday, July 9, 2009

Lightning Strikes Comments

Rating: 5.0

looking at the sky, it; s getting dark
as far as the eyes could see
it looks like a storm brewing
and i can't hide under a tree.
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louis rams
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way nice. very. i adore

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Christine Kerr 10 July 2009

Got to send this one on to a friend who's afraid of lightning. I'm not, because my mother use to make us go outside and play when it happen. Hmmm, now there's a thought for a new rhyme. 10++

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Kranthi Pothineni 10 July 2009

:) very nicely expressed.

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very true...a conscience it has not..it lands anywhere...we are not sure where to hide when it strikes

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James Mclain 09 July 2009

This is so true my friend.. still it has landed around myself many times.. :) ..iip

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