Tuesday, December 18, 2012

Lightning Out Loud Comments

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Lighting out loud
Hallucinating under the cloud
With greater powers came
Dark clouds and the rain
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Valsa George 05 December 2013

So at the end of day From heart to god I pray I ask not for the gold Tell me where peace is sold I will share it with a friend In peace I die in end A beautiful conclusion to the poem!

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Dee Corpolongo 03 June 2013

Wow...this here is moving and deep, and so very fantastic. Power is a soul/life killer at times, and definitely has robbed many of a peaceful, simple life....All for the price of power.. At least you realize this! A powerful excellent poem here....weth wise words shared..

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Unwritten Soul 13 January 2013

You have chose you path, no regret..the road you pick will always give you a choice, you should never regret..just detailed your plan and you not in wrong path just need some calm and figure it out..you will find true value at the last..no regret ok! _Soul

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Neela Nath Das 29 December 2012

Peace of mind is rarely found in human life. We have to achieve it thru art of living. Lovely write!

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Babatunde Aremu 21 December 2012

A thought provoking poem. I like it. Keep writing

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Elena Sandu 20 December 2012

Beautifully written! Hahaha they would love to put a price on a soul's peace, how glad there is no chance. The only thing that's left for us is the peace of own soul, true. Good write, thank you for share.

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Johnathan Juarez 19 December 2012

very heart felt and sincere. Good poem keep it up

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Stevie Taite 18 December 2012

Really good mate! Beautiful, perfect flow and so soul searchingly spilled! Really impressed! X

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