Thursday, February 23, 2012

Lightning And Thunder Comments

Rating: 3.5

When I was just a little child playing in my room
I saw the sudden lightning strike and heard the thunder boom
I'd run out to the front porch to sit and watch the show
Awed by Mother Nature and the power that would go
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Richard Lackman
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Melissa Carey 10 April 2012

Just amazing poetry! You have a gift. This is the type of poetry I love and feel as though I can't find anymore. But alas, I have!

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Valerie Dohren 01 April 2012

Fantastic poem. I was terrified of storms as a kid, but now quite enjoy them. A really great read.

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Martin O'Neill 19 March 2012

Yes, I want to go out like a bolt of lightning rather than a 7am March drizzle. Have you read Roger McGough's 'I want to die a Young Man's Death'? It's on this site and is just marvellous.

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Richard Lackman

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