Thursday, July 12, 2018

Lightning And Rainbows Comments

Rating: 5.0

Earth knows all, the large and small,
Sun never knew the clouds will rise,
Lightning never knows where to fall
A rainbow knows it's a touch for all.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 July 2018

A wonderful piece of work! Liked the penultimate stanza most! Thanks dear sir for sharing..10

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Nature! What a clever hunter you are! Never knew the bow hides a few arrows. A classic poem, Akhtar Sahab.10+

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 July 2018

See our love, lovely flowers with odors. Colors as the price of your seven colors, Lightning we have something to donate, Odors for you from the thankful donors..........stunning expression. It is a beautiful poem on nature nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 July 2018

brilliant description of rainbow- Nature! What a clever hunter you are! Never knew the bow hides a few arrows.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 July 2018

no no mirage it was like a match strike about you as a candle to finally light but one would have had no option but to have ignite..such was the life threatening burning light throughout that unforgettable night

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 July 2018

INCREDIBLE RAINBOW LIGHTENING SNAP Once I was traveling across the darkness of the cross country no lights but lightening ever so frightening perhaps wanted to ask me catch me and bury me we drove through the earth lightening brightened sky some how we never stopped even for a while nor a Pee as the lightening would have ensured that it did score and burnt all alive who dared through the darkness drive behind all odds of a wild vast desert lit only by its light

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Red Soul 13 July 2018

That is what's so fascinating about Nature. It both nurtures and destroys. A beautiful poem Jawad sahab. Thanks for sharing.

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Khalid Saifullah 13 July 2018

Nature has both lightning and rainbows, a beautiful poem.

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Kostas Lagos 13 July 2018

Rainbows and ightnings fill this poem making it brilliant!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 July 2018

A wonderful portrayal of the great attributes of nature.. A great write that centers on the maintenance of the cycle of life through interplay of.nature. Well crafted.10++++

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Robert Murray Smith 12 July 2018

Lovely nature write- - 10

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