Lightning Comments
When the lightning
Flashed, your face
Brightened in my eyes.
It was raining heavily
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Oh, I had such hopes in the beginning verse... but then love went astray and leaves such a pit of loneliness and doubt behind. Very well written, Suresh
The magic of a fleeting love is well painted on the canvas of this poem. Well expressed with compelling imagery.
On a rainy day interrupted by flashes of lightning, you met! But your beloved disappeared as a lightning through another flash of lightning that fell on your fate.
Lightening that brightens and cajoles all that's dream and allegoric lightening that ruins. Beautiful sir.
The first day when We met forever, dear Between the greenery Lightning, darknessand wind We got drenched, and You nestled to my chest. Nesting to my chest. what an expression. lovely one. tony
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7/18/2025 1:50:13 AM # 1.0.0
Just as the lightning was momentary, so was the love and dreams that accompanied it. In a flash, the lady love disappeared too. A sad poem of love.