Wednesday, September 21, 2016

Lightning Comments

Rating: 5.0

Blooms in a thousand dancing lights
Glooms fade by the fending
Blows of winds in flappy void
Loud riots to a breaking spot
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Engin Kavrak
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Kevin Patrick 21 September 2016

This really captures the magic of one of my favorite natural wonders, the details of the scenes come alive vividly through your words, the rhyming is pretty nice to when read out loud. It also helps there is some really cool imagery

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