Thursday, August 7, 2008

Lightning Comments

Rating: 5.0

A seasonal war weaponed
Persistent in the vault of heaven
Vajrastra, agniastra, varunastra..
Whipping of silvery flashes
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Indira Renganathan
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i wrote one on rain...not posted yet...very true that's what they used to say the god's fighting up there

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Kesav Easwaran 15 August 2008

yes, they are the demons...the missile smiths...the war weapon merchants…i liked the phrase crimsoned ammunitions most...insightful poem 10

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Rema Prasanna 07 August 2008

let vajrayudha works light all around 10 and more stars soo striking agree with Yoonoos...

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Emancipation Planz 07 August 2008

Indira... so striking tonight! ! ! I wish you peacefulness... and many thanks for reading me and your kindest comments (you have no Inbox open) ... aroha xx

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