Wednesday, March 6, 2019

Lightless Tomb Comments

Rating: 3.5

Run! Run!
Go and catch the light.
The final hour is upon us as the sun retreats
her formless embrace across the sea.
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Lily Ives
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Khairul Ahsan 06 March 2019

'The cold mist descends on my eyes, and I am left alone in this vast lightless tomb, to lay benumbed of love and hatred of this living world' - the poem ends beautifully!

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