Sunday, September 8, 2019

Lighthouse -2 Comments

Rating: 4.8

Hundreds steps to reach
The old beaconing lighthouse
It's worth every step
Seems you are close to flying
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rebecca Navarre 15 January 2023

So beautifully deep! .. With such captivating thoughts and imagery! .. Again Beyond #ing! ..++++++++++++++++++++++

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Soran M. H 03 August 2020

We get a fantastic feeling about this amazing poetic scene, always the light shadow of your lovely poem capturing their readers and make them to read with interest and think deeply about all its aspects and full meaning, brilliant Well done 10/10

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Soran M. H 03 August 2020

Seems you are close to flying Makes you nearer to heaven.

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 September 2019

Short and to the point with a strong message. When there is hope and strength and confidence one can achieve impossible. A meaningful write. Loved it.10++++++++ from me.

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 September 2019

lighthouse it's worthy to deserve the heaven, for the light still we are flying..............///

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Shaun Cronick 16 September 2019

The longest march begins with one step. And your poems Rose Marie they are more than worth the journey. Beautifully constructed with a sublime message so lovingly written. Thank you for sharing this captivating poem. 10+++ and added to my poem list. You are unique Rose Marie. And I thank you again.

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 September 2019

It's worth every step Seems you are close to flying Makes you nearer to heaven. experiences beautifully expressed. tony

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Nosheen Irfan 13 September 2019

A lighthouse is depicted as a symbol of hope. Every step is worth taking towards things that give you delight and make you feel free of worries. No less than 10.

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Akhtar Jawad 12 September 2019

Seems you are close to flying Makes you nearer to heaven. Lovely lines of a thoughtful poem. Who else can write such a nice poem, except Rose Marie Juan Austin.

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Kostas Lagos 11 September 2019

I am fond of lighthouses! Lovely poem

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Rebecca Navarre 10 September 2019

Beautiful, beautiful thoughts and imagery! .. Beautiful feeling too! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! ..10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ......................+++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 September 2019

A brilliant work! I sincerely appreciate the undertone....beautifully penned....................10

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Anjandev Roy 10 September 2019

Heaven is our ultimate goal. Wonderful poem. Thank u, dear poetess...Rose.anjandev roy.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 September 2019

Every step much needed! ! With positive morals. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 September 2019

Heaven is everything we wish to go to, we who believe in God. A brilliantly rendered and aptly poetically poem light that redeems us all and we will live in love, peace and harmony. Thank you so much dear great Poetess, this is again food for thoughts Lighthouse -2 a sweet poem most beautifully metaphored. God´s Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved family. Amen.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 September 2019

A well penned poem, dear ate Rose. The message of reaching the light of truth that leads to salvation is poetically conveyed....10+++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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