Monday, September 24, 2007

Light Your Fire On Us Comments

Rating: 3.8

I carry pride like a disease, you know I'm Stubborn
and I'm longing to be close!
I fell desperate without vision,
you wrap around me like a winter Coat.
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Mary Wismer
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Bernard Snyder 13 September 2015

Well written poem Mary. Lovely verses!

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 September 2015

Anoint our prayers through our respective toils on earth. Nice piece.

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Rahman Henry 13 September 2015

wow. It's a sufi-poem, about the heavenly love and devotion. I like it so much.

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Meggie Gultiano 26 September 2007

In revival, our hearts, mind and soul should be open, to light the fire burning....this is a great sharing, Mary.. hugs, Meggie

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Dr.subhendu Kar 26 September 2007

A beautiful story of love raved up with glory being blazed yet in arms, love exotically spread over a time but seemingly appeared to ramified, excellent poem, i like it, thanks for sharing

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