Saturday, August 12, 2017

Light White Clouds Comments

Rating: 5.0

On summer grass
freshly cut
I lay relaxing looking up at the
subtle slovenly shape shifter
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Clive Culverhouse
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Dr Antony Theodore 03 May 2020

On summer grass freshly cut I lay relaxing looking up at the subtle slovenly shape shifter floating above.. It steals my mind.. great poem, imagination. tony

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Thanks for commenting on my poem Light White Clouds..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 August 2017

Dream comes in mind bringing nice imagery. Summer grass looks up and sings seeing clouds and rain. Seeing nature' beauty life escapes fro a while. Light white clouds do magic here. An interesting verse is shared here is amazing.10

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Thanks for commenting and reading Light White Clouds.,

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