Light Vs. Darkness Comments
I see light,
That's all I want to see,
All I ever did.
The happiness overflowed,
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really nice lines..esp last stanza..about fading of light..n being alone..really nice thinking..10 for such a nice creation..
I like your style. Somehow the right words can make anything beautiful, even pain, sadness, and depression. Your poem is a journey from longing for light to ending up in darkness. 'Day after day, I start to feel something that I don't know, Something that I forgot, Something that wasn't meant to be remembered.' So poignant and real. Beautiful poem.
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9/10/2025 2:30:00 PM # 1.0.0
really nice lines..esp last stanza..about fading of light..n being alone..really nice thinking..10 for such a nice creation..