Light Up Comments

short and honest, i loved it :)

just the truth. well done. short but acutely penned.10.

An opinion poetically expressed

Stong sentiments, Thought provoking..............................

a nice thought provoking verses with a touched of the great prophets...biblical point of view implied to reality.......10

Light up Above the raging volcano Of your thought -------- that was really wonderful. i really love this part thats really great. thanks for letting me have this nice poem.10

this wonderful piece is so true. EVERYBODY makes mistakes by mistake as you said yourself..it was very good, short but really good. ~Hazel G.E

What wonderful advice.Light was the first thing God spoke into existence. in time, it will overcome darkness.10, for your wise thoughts. Warmest regards, Sandra

Thought provoking and tantalising. The economical style is really appealing.

A deep thought through simple and efficient words. A lovely poem! 10