Friday, June 29, 2012

Light Up The Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

A long time
The thunder rolls
And lightning strikes
My eyes
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Corrina Kavea
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Jeremiah Adediran 12 July 2012

Yes- let the moon And stars collide To lighten up the Night. - that's just beautiful. Thanks for that awesome expression!

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Saadat Tahir 29 June 2012

beautiful lines heartfelt and fluid loved the poem cheers

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Corrina Kavea

Corrina Kavea

Henderson, Auckland, New Zealand
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