Light Of The Moon Comments
shy cricket runs beneath the leaves
awe with moon searching for seeds
tiny antenae wiggles for safe passage
find frog’s sticky tongue on her legs
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I had read this poem exactly one year ago.It is nice to see this poem selected as Poem of the Day.Congratulations for this lovely write.
Its as soothing as in an evening under a huge cassia tree by a blue lake. Very well articulated paraphrasing. Congrats for being the member's PoD. X
Nature is source of writing of poems and here I see a beautiful poem.
Reminds me of the song YOU COULD'VE BEEN THE ONE popularized by AMERICA.....wonderful poem....congrats on being chosen, Manonton... Rated 10++++
Nice to visit the poem again. I am deeply impressed and enamored by your lovely portrayal of nature all around. Thanks and Congrats, Dear Friend.
Through a wonderful imagery and matching words, you have created a perfect landscape of nature. Loved reading it. Thank you and Congrats, Dear Poet. with the light of the moon above slowly blooming most beautiful bud
Congratulations on poem of the day, Manonton! Too bad we humans can't regrow legs like some creatures can. I need new knees and new hips.
thank you very much. scientist are working overtime for that, , , they also came up with some promising alternatives.
Your observations about the minutest manifestations of nature are superb so also is their presentation in beautiful verse form. Heartiest Congrats for this ability as also on Poem of the Day.
thank you very much. i credit my observation to nature thye're there waiting for our eyes to please
the first stanza talks about how a cricket is wounded: The cricket mentioned here may be anything that is going through rough life, but end of the day all hurts will be healed.. How true you are Manonton Dalan! ! ..Best of Luck and May Gods of Heaven bless you with what ever you desire to have! !
Light of moon is the love hidden in heart- -always fresh in memory- - It can touch you even many years after - - peeling paints.rust joints - -It can bloom most beautiful flowers.Thank you for sharing a wonderful poem.
It will surely heal! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
actually ten years that's from my file of poems... thank you very much
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7/18/2025 11:35:45 AM # 1.0.0
Great imagery and flow is so sweet. Nice poem. Congrats.