Saturday, March 12, 2005

Light Of The Landscape Comments

Rating: 2.7

Red sunset splashed on an exiting canvas of blue,
Moon rising upward reflecting down below,
to the contoured, creviced surface of deepening shadow on hue,
bouncing moonbeams, they become the show.
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Monica Engeler 13 March 2005

This is really, really nice. One thing try not to repeat words so much. Makes it sound like a beginner writer. I love the idea behind it. Keep penning. I like what your after.

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