Tuesday, October 21, 2008

Light Of Innocence Comments

Rating: 5.0

A new day is here and im aware
of new opportunities, challenges
the bliss of being alive
and all my thoughts i want to share
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Jacqueline Louw
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1khmerking Kampuchea 21 October 2008

Great poem! ! ! A 10 from me! Wonderful poem about how you manage to face difficulty big or small. Your poem about how your mind is brilliance in a way that you made yourself stayed innocent through hard time and rough roads. When oppunity comes, you chanllenge it and you earn your chance of another oppunity to grow, just as you were a child had grown into a women through challenging time. Great work, always enjoying your poem! ! ! Kept on writing! ! !

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