Sunday, December 11, 2011

Light Of Glory Comments

Rating: 5.0

Voices of the living
Faces of the dead
Shadows of their souls
In my head
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Dave Alan Walker
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Vipins Puthooran 13 December 2011

[Mourning for the living] What an amazing poem! ! ! I can relate many things here! ! ! 10+++

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Carla Olson 12 December 2011

David, what a special and great write. U have made me think on a spiritual and deep level which I love. It is true, that people do not realize the spirits are not in mourning, but feeling glorious and still living even though they cannot be seen and are not among the living.

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Asif Andalib 12 December 2011

It's a nice poem. I like the following stanza most Voices of the living Faces of the dead Shadows of their souls In my head Thanks for sharing.

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Ramesh Rai 11 December 2011

nice poem, this life is like a dead body if it is unable to move.

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James William 11 December 2011

that is so so beautiful

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Sonali Sings 11 December 2011

Death is liberty that means..living is like dying..wish it were reverse. Great, complicated though!

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