Saturday, March 19, 2011

Light Of A Friend Comments

Rating: 5.0

Laying here in my bed
There is something penetrating like eating a dull lead
I don’t know exactly what it is
But it keeps swallowing my consciousness and fell in abyss
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Sheldon Allen Saluta
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Auty Paul Jason 24 March 2011

Nice poem I will said you are in love with your friend. If not You got a real good humor at writing poems lady.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 19 March 2011

A friend can light up your life...nice poem Sheldon.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 19 March 2011

a trusted friend is really something you would always want to have... thanks for the share!

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I'm not sure mediocre fits... mediocrity might fit better. it seemed forced in areas, but that might be the varying line lengths. i liked the ending. God bless

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Fay Slimm 19 March 2011

The change in mood is well described here Sheldon and the need to give and to receive friendly love is expressed as first in importance if we want true happiness. A wise and fine-worded verse.

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