Tuesday, March 14, 2006

Light Night Breeze To One Who Calls Himself A Friend Comments

Rating: 5.0

My erratic son, why were we going down?
Better to always watch out for safety passages
in time with the joints' key holder,
and most especially so,
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Erhard Hans Josef Lang
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Nalini Hebbar 23 June 2006

And don't petty yourself for being left unconsidered, caveman son of egotism in your pitch-black night lair, i loved these lines...its beautiful...the poem is very good but very long...took me a long time to read and understand it...since your poems need a lot of deep reading... can you limit the length?

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Erhard Hans Josef Lang

Erhard Hans Josef Lang

Günzburg/Danube Germany
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