Thursday, April 12, 2018

Light Lulls Comments

Rating: 5.0

As sea gulls fly so free. Over and
across oceans so deep. Am i awake
or, am i asleep. Is it my own echo's
that speak. Time feels like a dream.
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Rebecca Navarre
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Unnikrishnan E S 13 April 2018

Hi Becca, Very well crafted poem. It is my own echoes that I Speak to. Time feels like a dream Very innovative and poetic expressions. I am reminded of Albert Einstein's theory of Space-Time continuum, part of the relativity theory. Marvellous write. Onto my poem list with top honours.

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Rebecca Navarre 13 April 2018

Thank You! ! ! Unnikrishnan, For Such A Thoughtful And Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Has Ever Such Heart And Feeling! ! ! ! ! With Such Beauty, Depth And Meaning! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 April 2018

Rebecca, such a lovely poem👍👍👍

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Rebecca Navarre 13 April 2018

Thank You! ! ! Bernard, For Such A Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Has Depth, Beauty And Light! ! ! ! ! That Brings The Reader Delight! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Bill Cantrell 12 April 2018

Wow, this is I think your best work that I have read! ! ! Every word is just perfect! ! Outstanding poem! !

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Rebecca Navarre 13 April 2018

Thank You! ! ! Bill, For Such A Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Has Ever Such Deep Beauty! ! ! ! ! Spirit And Strength! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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