Light Lulls Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Light Lulls

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As sea gulls fly so free. Over and
across oceans so deep. Am i awake
or, am i asleep. Is it my own echo's
that speak. Time feels like a dream.
Locked in such grace and beauty. As
all stops, and all moves. Hold my
shawl tight. Trace the sands grooves.
As life calls, and your voice lulls.

Thursday, April 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 13 April 2018

Hi Becca, Very well crafted poem. It is my own echoes that I Speak to. Time feels like a dream Very innovative and poetic expressions. I am reminded of Albert Einstein's theory of Space-Time continuum, part of the relativity theory. Marvellous write. Onto my poem list with top honours.

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Rebecca Navarre 13 April 2018

Thank You! ! ! Unnikrishnan, For Such A Thoughtful And Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Has Ever Such Heart And Feeling! ! ! ! ! With Such Beauty, Depth And Meaning! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 April 2018

Rebecca, such a lovely poem👍👍👍

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Rebecca Navarre 13 April 2018

Thank You! ! ! Bernard, For Such A Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Has Depth, Beauty And Light! ! ! ! ! That Brings The Reader Delight! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Bill Cantrell 12 April 2018

Wow, this is I think your best work that I have read! ! ! Every word is just perfect! ! Outstanding poem! !

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Rebecca Navarre 13 April 2018

Thank You! ! ! Bill, For Such A Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Has Ever Such Deep Beauty! ! ! ! ! Spirit And Strength! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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