Tuesday, February 9, 2010

Light, Love And Life Comments

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Light........!
What is it..........? You always tell me
Is it bright........?
Is it clear..........? like your magical love
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punsara amarasinghe
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Dulakshi Wakista 22 February 2010

Very well expressed.So nicely you've conveyed.I like your 2nd stanza. You always praise brightness of the sunshine....... wonder of the sky.....splendour of the flowers like your love....! But.........my dear How i see the sunshine how I see the sky of flowers I am your blind prince without a crown I feel only the warmth of your love Yes you'll be a blind prince.Good wrork.Keep on writing.

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