Sunday, October 4, 2009

Light In The Night Comments

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The sun stopped peeping secretly through the green leaves
The shadows lengthened and silently grew to size
The ghosts in them came to life, expressing their glee
The forest was courting the wild darkness it seized
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 March 2020

A beautiful poem crafted by a highly creative and brilliant mind. Poetry can take us to that realm where there is no bounds. It can come with the wonders of nature anywhere and anytime and holds us spellbound.

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Patti Masterman 17 February 2010

How true! Unconscious of dangers, he was busy writing his heart into works of art, feeling himself entirely surrounded by a tapestry of beauty. The title is subtle and perfect and it drew me in, Kesav.

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, aryaindia 07 December 2009

Your imagination held me spellbound in this exotic spirited poem that is full of gleaming truth.........a light found in the night. arya

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Ejaz Khan 19 October 2009

A beautiful write, enthralling the reader till the very end, not all poets are wise or inspired but those who are, are indeed blessing to the world, thanks for sharing your thoughts with us!

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Ken E Hall 17 October 2009

I think you have shown us the light Kesav a delightful poem on the insight of where we find an inspiration and feelings do come from the deep thanks for the read ++++++10 regards

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Maitreyee Joshi 16 October 2009

the poets are known to coneive ideas and poems in the most difficult and wierd situations.the sorroundings do not matter.the inner world is what matters to the poet.10+++

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Now this goes to show how wise and wonderful poets are, finding the light. I lovely narration to come to a great conclusion. 10 love Karin

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premji premji 15 October 2009

keshavji, every poet has a hidden sun within his soul... his rays comes out as words.........................

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Winnie Angel 15 October 2009

The poet, unruffled with a gleam in his eyes, Was writing on the light he conceived yester night… the beginning in suspense and the end in such a light veins is - a different way to keep sustaining the interest of a reader. Winnie liked the supense and the last two lines!

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Raj Arumugam 14 October 2009

a delightful poem on the nature of the poet's mind...love it!

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Mark Nwagwu 13 October 2009

a great service for poets who save sunlight of the day only to pull it out of their pocket in the morning, mulling on night on the word now ready to write. Fabulous, Kes, fabulous! mark

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 12 October 2009

Truly, a most enjoyable read Kesav, when inspired such brilliance comes to the fore to dazzle as you have just done here..

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Bob Blackwell 12 October 2009

I hope your inner light of yesterday never fades, so you can continue to write illuminating poetry like this. warm Regards Bob 10

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Sandra Fowler 12 October 2009

Your last stanza is very expressive. We poets are compelled to create regardless of the circumstances. We are writing for our lives after all. Excellent, Kesav. Kind wishes, Sandra

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Sandra Martyres 10 October 2009

An amazing poem Kesav.... from a tense beginning to a happy poetic ending..Yes it si true a poet can easily get lost in his own poetry and write even in very dim light.10

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Marilyn Lott 09 October 2009

A demonstration of how poetry can take over ones life and he/she can forget the rest of the world for a time. We can write day or night, dark or light. Doesn't matter. Well written and you talk for all of us. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Antonio Liao 09 October 2009

like magic wand....the mind comes in a very and great pleasant surprise..... the merging of dream and reality...galloping of the poem you see... a wonderful concept...yah! the sun gives beauty as your poem spark like lightning in the sky....thank you my dear friend...God bless. i am inspired ...a 10 +++++

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Kesav Easwaran 08 October 2009

The pleasure in writing poems gets augmented when one receives insightful comments...yes; darkness outside or not we always write from the light we conceive with in...thanks a lot Sonya Kesav Easwaran

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Nalini Hebbar 08 October 2009

a wonderful poem...full of suspense and a gratifying happy ending...great read

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Sonya Florentino 08 October 2009

i love this Kesav.... started out as a sort of almost humorous mystery-horror tale and ending with a quite deep meaningful stanza showing how one doesn't need actual light to write.....one can write by moonlight.... or by the light from within......

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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