Light in the chamber
Glass, you keep it inside
Not as fortress from letting it brighten the dark
But your transparency magnify its power to cross the night
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Soul, there is a tradition in various parts of the world in which the birthday person doesn't receive gifts, but rather, gives them to his/her friends. I see that you are part of that tradition. In addition to your friendship, you have given us these two gifts. Firstly, this beautiful heart-felt poem which speaks multitudes. And secondly, acknowledgement of our friendships. I am honoured and humbled to be included in this circle of poets who are so gifted and compassionate. May the circle never be broken! And may we all continue to share our poems with each other and provide support and encouragement. May you forever remain blessed, Soul. You are truly one of a kind!
Here there is no tradition like dear, at least so far as i observed... it just i think birthday is a anniversary of we having first day in this life, this dimension...so supposedly we should be thankful to God, parents who raised us and whoever make us stronger person and make our life so beautiful...when i am thinking of that, i feel that i should give express my thankful and giving my heart out to each person that comes along to my life journey and polished me to be better day by day...And when i wrote down i might missed someone but i dont mean it, sorry for i cant put it here...But to my greatest companion now and past, thanks for everything...your name all written on my heart's wall... :) Thanks Richard for being my good friend :)
You are really deeply, friend of all of us! ! ! You are the light we have here dear! Your heart is immense and beautiful! Thank you dear poet for your existence!
Everybody is a light and we are just amplifying each other light so what we can get is brightness! thank you dear for your words, and thank you also for be part of my life as friend that i never see but keep giving me strong hugs from far :) i do appreciate all of you. God knows!
What a nice energy enhancing poem. The conservation law has been left far behind. Thank you very much,
Wonderful poem, Soul. A wonderful friendship to celebrate. While reading through the names, it brought back so many memories to friendships we enjoyed throughout the years. Some of the friendships here on this site, I have experienced as soul-friends, more sometimes than my friends in my daily life. So true, Soul, the light gets magnified, it works both ways. Thanks my friend.
Thank you dear Hans, I always treasure these friendships of mine...I dont know them personally, i dont need to interupt all things in their life, enough for me to feel the prestine of their souls, how our heart bridged by honesty, trust and kindness..i wont ask for other things, indeed i agree with you..i feel many friends here are more soul-linked to myself that some of my friend i've met in my life... because you all know my heart, the expression of my soul, in depth than just a hello and bye...and to have all of your beautiful minds here really healing, it lift my spirit when i am down, it cure my weakness when i need a strength, and because of that Thanks for magnifying my strength by your kind personality, positive poems and beautiful minds, what a lovely group of friends i have here...neverthesless i have lost some in time, but i owe them for in my life journey...Thanks All
What A Strong Bright Shinning Soul/Light! ! ! ! ! In This Breathtakingly Beautifully Written Poem! ! ! ! ! Such Beautiful Heart Shown! ! ! ! ! And Ya! ! ! ! ! Happy Birthday! ! ! ! ! Hope It Was Very Special! ! ! ! ! May All Your Wishes/ Dreams Come True! ! ! ! ! Hope You Treated Your Self... To Something Special Just For You! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles....Thank You So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Your Heart So Kind! ! ! ! !
Thank you Rebecca, i think to have people smiling like you are now is the best treat to have these days and whole life. This work is from me to all of you that kindly share your heart n kindness, it beyond the words but thats what i can do for all here.
It is a mervelous poem on friendship and life having phiolosophically sound. Let me quote... So do my love i carry in me Here my beloved friends, my remedy You magnify my love across the world Signifying peace is here as our hands hold. It is a great tribute to friends, the poets and poetesses. Thanks for sharing.
I think i have to say, i dedicated this to you too...because you read my work and always keep motivating me regardless how my weakness in poetry is, you only purify good things only, Thanks sir, i appreciate that...Thanks for being a great concave lens/bulb to help me deliver my light.. :)
Blessed glass.. who are your friends. And I can't comment in the ink of light, and you deserve more. Very very honest poem. Best wishes friend
You are the blessed glass, i wont compare each of you or devaluate of you...how could i? i deserve more yes but not of myself but more from you, all of you for being kind and nice...I am just a human that has weak points too, and because great friends always push me to be far...i am better so i thank you Muhammad Ali, and all great friends. God bless all of my beloved friends! Amen
Thank you for once again broadening my horizon. I never before looked at the glass bowl surrounding a light bulb with any curiosity at all- well, you just woke me up, Soul. I have got to be much more like you and SEE what is really going on with these everyday items. Great and lasting image, my friend. If I am the light You are the magnifying chamber- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - You, Soul, are both! ! ! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
But Susan, you and other friends are the ones that keep me revived...and to have all of you is something beautiful to keep in life, no what great friends are irreplaceable, and l love them.. Thanks for always stand strong/weak with me :)
A truly inspired idea and a truly inspired work! This is terrific, Soul.
Beautiful friends like you n most that I have met here inspired me, I could be candle to light all of u till the end. Thanks dear
Happy Birthday Soul! Yes I voyaged back to poemhunter for a bit. Glad to see you are still aboard. Loved your poem and tribute to your friends. You are a pure creature, just like the light you describe in your poem.
Awww Thank you, I always remember all my friends and you as well, i am glad you did return that bright day! yeay. Ellias always asked me about you when we talked here, because we both know you for long, addicted to your kind heart and friendship.. I am not pure as light, i am just dark as night but not by colour but by thought...hahahaha..I am so happy you are returning even for a while since long time back, and even visit me :) it made me happy :) Thank you dear Captain! Ai Ai captain hahaha.
Happy birthday dear Soul. Your poem itself is a beacon that magnifies your beauty and strength of love as a person and a talented poet. Thank you for being you and thank you for your inspiring words.
Thank you for always being sweet to me each time, who said candies and sugar is the sweetest one? great friends are sweeter :) . You also a talented poet and kind person, friends....you are part of my strength and you know me more than what other people see me daily...because you read from my soul more than them...and Thank you for be friend of mine and by being beautiful you.
great lover of words magnifies soul as a token of birthday gift to one and all who read the poems- my ten###