Monday, August 10, 2009

Light House Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mounted by putting stone on stone
In order not to be wrecked the ships on the rocks
A shining projector at the top
Light house started the life in this way
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Nilufer Dursun
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Eyan Desir 29 September 2009

Interesting write....good work

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 10 August 2009

The house of lonelinessbuilt by stones Night and day Around flying sea gulls Coming and goin waves uselessly Ships, small boats, boats In the ancient loneliness It all ways watched The light house has become a symbol of lonliness and ancientness in this poem. The imagery seems to be very real. Its nice to read a poem by a turkish poet. thanks for the translation, Nilufer. I also have a poem with the same title on my page and I would like you to read it. I hope you will like it. Best Wishes Naseer

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 August 2009

A fine emblemetic expressions! 10+

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