Tuesday, July 7, 2009

Light Filtering Through The Clouds Comments

Rating: 5.0

through the clouds it drifts
a sea of milk

a ray of hope
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Beena Jal
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Afzal Shauq 31 May 2010

a sight to feel a light that heal material of dreams a magical seam an angels ride sun's own pride a sight that fills what a magical feeling! fantastic.. the ideas you expressed in this poems are multiple but inter related to each other and a visualized effect is found.. quite interesting poem and the way you wrote is soul touching...well done

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Obinna Eruchie 18 July 2009

A light full of love and hope. A creative effort.

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Akram Saqib 09 July 2009

good write beenish keep it on

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Saadat Tahir 07 July 2009

very nice lines and great footnote..... helps to understand the context great flow...easy read...well written] cheers

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Beena Jal

Beena Jal

Rawalpindi, Pakistan
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