Sunday, July 1, 2012

Light Fades Out Comments

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Light fades out...
The day is over.
My ancestors saw this,
Rolling of day and night,
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Neela Nath Das
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Babatunde Aremu 11 July 2012

Yes, same for all, nobles or downtrodden, Light must fade out. This poem is reality of man's finality. It is a must read. I like it.

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Valsa George 11 July 2012

Yes oneday we'll all fade out, leaving no foot prints in the sands of time..! ..beautifully written! !

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Kasia Fedyk 05 July 2012

Wow, Nita this is amazing poem, it is so heart felt and so very true, we can all feel those moments even now while we are fully in one breath and heart beat. Love, Kasia NAMSTE

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Indira Babbellapati 03 July 2012

our breath and beat! time, a master-crafter; the unseen hand!

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Ralph The Elf 02 July 2012

this is so beautiful...very poignant write... keep it up

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Shouvik Roy 02 July 2012

hmm...this reminded me of my aunt and her deeds...wonderfully written thanks

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