Saturday, May 14, 2016

Light Echoes Comments

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Twenty thousand light-years away
outburst of starry blaze occurred,
in a spectacular display,
echoing light of halo blurred.
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Harley White
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Bill Cantrell 29 December 2017

Wow! Each anomaly in heaven has its own mystery, I absolutely cherish your last two stanzas, especially the next to last, All that is born is bound to die Blushes of morn that brush the sky Fade with the rising sun on high But shade to dusk when night draws nigh..wow! !

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Harley White 29 December 2017

How fortunate I am that you are a reader of my poems! Sometimes it seems one is creating in a vacuum, and then someone like you comes along and make all the careful craftsmanship feel worthwhile! The stanza you quote is special to me, too. Thank you so much!

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