Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Light & Darkness Comments

Rating: 4.0

'Light will shine the way,
and darkness will look more gloom',
but that will be the day
we meet our impendent doom.
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Joshua Ruiz Melendez
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Anthony Han 08 June 2009

i like this poem alot, it opens people up to the truth of most things people are bias about, well said!

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Jennie Radley 05 June 2009

Your poems seem to reflect a worry about the struggle of good versus evil; can I quote to you - 'There's so much good in the worst of us, and so much bad in the best of us, It ill becomes any of us to criticise the rest of us'. Of the three poems, I like 'Light and Darkness' best, especially 'Those who do not know history are doomed to live it again'. How true.

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Joshua Ruiz Melendez

Joshua Ruiz Melendez

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