Monday, April 6, 2009

Light Can Weep. Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Early morning sun streams through windowpane
And washes me awake with Devonish air
Breezing clean and lucid. I think again
Of you, wishing you with me, not there
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Fay Slimm
ocean warning
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 06 April 2009

Imageful, and well structured work, my dear...Poignance exemplified! FjR ***

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Catrina Heart 06 April 2009

poignancy emerged in this theme....well penned...Thanks! 10

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Juneil Sechico 06 April 2009

so sad fay! I'm feeling sorry for this! What's the story behind this Fay?

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Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) 06 April 2009

this is sad, fay.. beautifully expressed though

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Fiona Davidson 06 April 2009

This is such a powerful write Fay...brings a whole world of emotion up in the reader...wonderful write...Fi 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
Fay Slimm
Fay Slimm
in Cornwall U.K.
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